Good News Translation
The men stared at her because she was so beautiful. They listened to her story and said,

New Revised Standard Version
When the men heard her words, and observed her face—she was in their eyes marvelously beautiful—they said to her,

Contemporary English Version
The men noticed that Judith was very beautiful. So after she finished talking, they said,

New American Bible
When the men heard her words and gazed upon her face, which appeared marvelously beautiful to them, they said to her,

Douay-Rheims Bible
And when the men had heard her words, they beheld her face, and their eyes were amazed, for they wondered exceedingly at her beauty.

And when the men had heard her words, they beheld her face, and their eyes were amazed, for they wondered exceedingly at her beauty.

Judith 10:12
And she answered: I am a daughter of the Hebrews, and I am fled from them, because I knew they would be made a prey to you, because they despised you, and would not of their own accord yield themselves, that they might find mercy in your sight.

Judith 10:13
For this reason I thought with myself, saying: I will go to the presence of the prince Holofernes, that I may tell him their secrets, and shew him by what way he may take them, without the loss of one man of his army.

Judith 10:15
And they said to her: Thou hast saved thy life by taking this resolution, to come down to our lord.

Judith 10:16
And be assured of this, that when thou shalt stand before him, he will treat thee well, and thou wilt be most acceptable to his heart. And they brought her to the tent of Holofernes, telling him of her.