GOD'S WORD® Translation
David lived in the fortress and called it the City of David. He built the city [of Jerusalem] around it from the Millo to the palace.

American Standard Version
And David dwelt in the stronghold, and called it the city of David. And David built round about from Millo and inward.

Berean Study Bible
So David took up residence in the fortress and called it the City of David. He built it up all the way around, from the supporting terraces inward.

Douay-Rheims Bible
And David dwelt in the castle, and called it, The city of David: and built round about from Mello and inwards.

English Revised Version
And David dwelt in the strong hold, and called it the city of David. And David built round about from Millo and inward.

King James Bible
So David dwelt in the fort, and called it the city of David. And David built round about from Millo and inward.

World English Bible
David lived in the stronghold, and called it the city of David. David built around from Millo and inward.

Young's Literal Translation
And David dwelleth in the fortress, and calleth it -- City of David, and David buildeth round about, from Millo and inward,

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